1. I have added a test drive meme link to the log sample and changed the sample I already had to include more of Joss' thoughts
2. The absolute prodigy statement is ditched.
3. I had her learn to talk at "normal age"
4. I had her go to a boarding school that's not Emma. Fixed the history from there.
5. All unapproved tech has been deleted
6. Joss' personalty and skills have been toned down quite a bit. She has only 120 IQ instead of 160, she no longer knows martial arts, she is no longer able to update her tech, and some other skills have been striped. She's also not perfectly adapt in most social situations, but she's not a total nerd ether.
7. I have created a whole section dedicated to AU differences, and why I made them.
However, there is something I could not change.
Joss is still kind of good with tech, and here's how I justify it. I know from personal experience that if your parents have a business, then you're going to end up working in it, and when you work it you will end up learning about the product it sells.
Joss' dad is in the tech business, no one has disputed that, therefore she learned about tech.
At this point, I have done all I could. I really hope that Joss is approved. but if she isn't I understand. The one thing I know is that I can't send Joss to the institute without redeeming abilities. If she can't use tech, then she needs something else, or else she's just going to be squashed. So if she's not good enough now then...well...there's nothing else I can do.
Whatever your decision, I would love it if we could schedule a chat, about the details of making character apps.
Re: PENDING
1. I have added a test drive meme link to the log sample and changed the sample I already had to include more of Joss' thoughts
2. The absolute prodigy statement is ditched.
3. I had her learn to talk at "normal age"
4. I had her go to a boarding school that's not Emma. Fixed the history from there.
5. All unapproved tech has been deleted
6. Joss' personalty and skills have been toned down quite a bit. She has only 120 IQ instead of 160, she no longer knows martial arts, she is no longer able to update her tech, and some other skills have been striped. She's also not perfectly adapt in most social situations, but she's not a total nerd ether.
7. I have created a whole section dedicated to AU differences, and why I made them.
However, there is something I could not change.
Joss is still kind of good with tech, and here's how I justify it. I know from personal experience that if your parents have a business, then you're going to end up working in it, and when you work it you will end up learning about the product it sells.
Joss' dad is in the tech business, no one has disputed that, therefore she learned about tech.
At this point, I have done all I could. I really hope that Joss is approved. but if she isn't I understand. The one thing I know is that I can't send Joss to the institute without redeeming abilities. If she can't use tech, then she needs something else, or else she's just going to be squashed. So if she's not good enough now then...well...there's nothing else I can do.
Whatever your decision, I would love it if we could schedule a chat, about the details of making character apps.