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The Xavier Institute Mod Journal ([personal profile] astonishing_xmods) wrote 2014-09-01 03:36 am (UTC)

PENDING

While most of the app is good, we'll need to see a revised personality section before we can accept it. While it explores how Koakuma has changed over the course of the timeskip, it does not adequately detail her basic personality, meaning the reader does not receive a clear idea of her character.

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