While your personality and samples were solid, there are a few changes we need to see before accepting this application. In abilities, we would like to see the breath ability dropped; even if toned down from canon, in combination with the other powers present, it seems an unnecessary addition. Secondly, given that Marvel already has a mutant-heavy community in Manhattan, we would prefer that District X be substituted for Fabletown in his history.

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