You are close. We do agree that her being good with tech is ok and the reasoning behind that is sound, the changes you have made to her abilities work and you've made a lot of the changes we wanted to see. However there are still a couple things left that need to be addressed.
We're still a little bit unclear on what is and isn't canon based. We'd recommend giving us the personality she shows in the episode and then following it up with the changes you are making over the year of time that's gone past since she's been aged up. Start with that core, and then tell us how she's grown over the last year. The way it is now we find more about the differences in her history rather than her personality and the personality is what is important. The history we get from the AU History and that section is fine.
The other thing is that sometimes your language gets too scientific. "Adapts to social situations" doesn't really tell us much about her. Does it mean she hides who she is in some situations to fit in? Or does it mean she's friendly and good at talking to people and making friends? We're not entirely clear on the meaning the way it is.
Anyway those are the changes we'd ask for. You still have 4 more days to respond to these requests.
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We're still a little bit unclear on what is and isn't canon based. We'd recommend giving us the personality she shows in the episode and then following it up with the changes you are making over the year of time that's gone past since she's been aged up. Start with that core, and then tell us how she's grown over the last year. The way it is now we find more about the differences in her history rather than her personality and the personality is what is important. The history we get from the AU History and that section is fine.
The other thing is that sometimes your language gets too scientific. "Adapts to social situations" doesn't really tell us much about her. Does it mean she hides who she is in some situations to fit in? Or does it mean she's friendly and good at talking to people and making friends? We're not entirely clear on the meaning the way it is.
Anyway those are the changes we'd ask for. You still have 4 more days to respond to these requests.
Thank you