Thank you for your interest in our game! Your app looks good overall (we especially like how you've incorporated in-game plot elements into Zancrow's backstory), but we're going to ask for some revisions before we can accept it.

While the personality and history sections meet basic length requirements, the mod team would like to see them more fleshed-out and detailed, the history in particular. In addition, the application could use a little bit of overall tidying up as far as grammar, etc.

You have one week to make revisions and respond to this request.