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The Xavier Institute Mod Journal ([personal profile] astonishing_xmods) wrote 2015-01-17 12:30 pm (UTC)

PENDING

Hi, there!

While the app looks good overall, there are two points the mod team would like to request revision on.

First, regarding powers: There isn't a solid enough logical connection between all of the effects of the White Fire. In particular, the effect of external use on a target's state of mind and the damaging effect on dark/undead beings seem more in line with magic than with a mutation, and would probably be better off cut out.

Second, regarding the personality section: It's rather bare-bones. We'd like to see it fleshed out into something more substantial.

You have one week to respond to this request.

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