Several revisions are required before we can accept this application.
Please decide on a specific age and faculty position. Unless it's something really out there, we're not going to give revisions for what you choose, so you're welcome to pick whatever you think suits her best!
Additionally, the personality section is bare bones and requires fleshing out. We would like to see the section expanded on, touching on the information in more depth and also discussing her more negative traits.
Her power also needs further tweaking. We're asking you to drop the added benefits of the ability and simply stick with the power-copying aspect.
Finally, we again need a sample of the character using the network -- a video, voice, or text post.
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Please decide on a specific age and faculty position. Unless it's something really out there, we're not going to give revisions for what you choose, so you're welcome to pick whatever you think suits her best!
Additionally, the personality section is bare bones and requires fleshing out. We would like to see the section expanded on, touching on the information in more depth and also discussing her more negative traits.
Her power also needs further tweaking. We're asking you to drop the added benefits of the ability and simply stick with the power-copying aspect.
Finally, we again need a sample of the character using the network -- a video, voice, or text post.
You have one week to respond to this request.