Before we can accept this application, we'll need a couple of revisions.
As written, the personality section focuses more on her history than it does personality. We would like to see a few paragraphs discussing things such as her temperament, her strengths, her weaknesses, etc. Drawing on her history for examples is fine, but we'd like to see a stronger description of who she is rather than just her response to the discovery of her powers!
Additionally, we need a sample that showcases her using the game's network. Please write up an example of a video, voice, or text post she would make.
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As written, the personality section focuses more on her history than it does personality. We would like to see a few paragraphs discussing things such as her temperament, her strengths, her weaknesses, etc. Drawing on her history for examples is fine, but we'd like to see a stronger description of who she is rather than just her response to the discovery of her powers!
Additionally, we need a sample that showcases her using the game's network. Please write up an example of a video, voice, or text post she would make.
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