I put your comments in bold above the sections that got the majority of the revisions, to show not just that I addressed them, but also where I did so that you do not have to reread every last bit of it.
I have to say, it is rare in my life that I am asked to write more. After having done Andellen's, I had erred (clearly) on the side of less since his was so meaty.
On the topic of Andellen, I accept the rejection, however, I am planning on going over the notes in a post and attempting to explain myself; not because I am trying to appeal the decision... in hindsight I agree with you, but because I feel it is important for myself, if for no other reason, that it is explained. You may, of course, feel free to skip reading it. I will be replying to that from that name, on that comment.
On this one, here is Tiamaris, and if you need any further changes, please do not hesitate to ask. Rereading the Elantra books, I am getting excited about the possibility of playing him as he is my favorite character. (The ones I like most seem to be the ones who have the least page time over thw whole of the series- Tiamaris, Tara, Yblline, Andellen.)
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I put your comments in bold above the sections that got the majority of the revisions, to show not just that I addressed them, but also where I did so that you do not have to reread every last bit of it.
I have to say, it is rare in my life that I am asked to write more. After having done Andellen's, I had erred (clearly) on the side of less since his was so meaty.
On the topic of Andellen, I accept the rejection, however, I am planning on going over the notes in a post and attempting to explain myself; not because I am trying to appeal the decision... in hindsight I agree with you, but because I feel it is important for myself, if for no other reason, that it is explained. You may, of course, feel free to skip reading it. I will be replying to that from that name, on that comment.
On this one, here is Tiamaris, and if you need any further changes, please do not hesitate to ask. Rereading the Elantra books, I am getting excited about the possibility of playing him as he is my favorite character. (The ones I like most seem to be the ones who have the least page time over thw whole of the series- Tiamaris, Tara, Yblline, Andellen.)