This one we feel has a better chance of getting into the game than your other app, but it still needs some tweaking.
Namely, once again, we need an actual canon resource to check your app against. If one doesn't exist, we will accept a summary written by you. Either way, we still need some kind of canon reference.
Secondly, the personality section is too scant for a character we can assume appears across multiple books in the series. It would need to be beefed considerably in order to paint a more complete idea of the character.
Finally, and we hope this is a minor enough fix, but the people eating cannot be a sustained aspect of the character's were-dragon powers. If it was believed it would be a continuing issue with him, logically, Xavier would be more likely to put him in a holding cell and under strict supervision than allowing him to roam the halls as a student. It's a matter of in character actions begetting in character consequences.
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Namely, once again, we need an actual canon resource to check your app against. If one doesn't exist, we will accept a summary written by you. Either way, we still need some kind of canon reference.
Secondly, the personality section is too scant for a character we can assume appears across multiple books in the series. It would need to be beefed considerably in order to paint a more complete idea of the character.
Finally, and we hope this is a minor enough fix, but the people eating cannot be a sustained aspect of the character's were-dragon powers. If it was believed it would be a continuing issue with him, logically, Xavier would be more likely to put him in a holding cell and under strict supervision than allowing him to roam the halls as a student. It's a matter of in character actions begetting in character consequences.
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