The app as it stands cannot be accepted to this game. The crux of the issue are the powers. Not only is this a laundry list of abilities that aren't at all noticeably related (if they are meant to seem related, it is too far of a stretch for the mods to deem acceptable), but our canon familiar mod has informed us that these aren't even the powers of the character in question.

Secondly, the history seems to integrate said powers too heavily and would need to be completely rewritten. There are also several formatting issues that just make the app plain difficult to read.

We apologize, but because of the number of issues with the app and the severity of those issues, we cannot accept it at this time or ask for revisions. We recommend a total rewrite, save for the personality section, which we will say was very very good.